Destine+Herring

==//HOW DID I END UP RITE HERE WITH YOU, AFTER ALL THE THINGS THAT I BEEN THOURGH show me a good time aw yeah aw yeah show me a good time aw yea aw yea i live for the nite that i cant remember with the people that i wont foget spended all all the money i just worked my butt of for doing things that i wont regret i dont wait to long long long long long long telling err body that we know its about to be on on on on on o//==


 * why did it happen to him **
 * just because he looked like me **
 * i speak my mind and it flowed **
 * with the wind i him **
 * trey thats him he had to go **
 * he only seventeen he was hungry **
 * he got soad skeetls to zemm your **
 * die man i ant playing man **

==//Response 1 : My Thought On My Community Is It Is Viloent And Not That Safe.Someone Is Always Getting Shot Or Injured.The Police Or Ambulance Is Always Around .I Do Like Where I Live, Because I Live By All My Friends And Most Family.My School I Feel Can Be Improved More And The//==

==//Response 2 : One Day Mr.Boll Was In The Gym With The Basketball Team Bragging Anout His New Car And How Good He Was At Basketall.That Night It Had Snowed And We Had A 2-Hour Delay That Morning.That Week Mr.Boll Had Got Into A Car Crash And His Insurance Had Covered His Cra.The Car Was Really Fast.After Practice The Team Followed Mr.Boll Out To His New Car.They Made Snowballs As Mr.Boll Warmed Up His Car.Mr.Boll Began Bragging About His Car Again And They Boys Threw The Snowballs.Mr.Boll Thought They Were About To Have A Snowball And Threw One Back.The Boys Made More And Targeted Mr.Boll While He Was STanding By His Car.One Boy Accidently Hit The Car An Mr.Boll Got Angry.He Called Mr.Uhlinger And The Boys Really Didnt Like Him, So They Grabbed An Icecle And Tossed It In The Air.It Almost Landed On Mr.Uhlinger But Hit The Car.Mr.Boll Was Fierced And Ready To Fight.But He Realized They Were Litlle Kids.So They Made A Bet That They Would Have To Play Basketball Against The Teachers In Order For Mr.Boll To Drop It.If The Boys Win ,Mr.Boll Will Drop The Whole Thing.If The Teachers Win The Boys Will Have To Get A Job.So They Played And The Teachers Won.The Boys Got A Job And Gave Mr.Boll The Money.The Day After Mr.Boll Went To School Bragging Again About How The Boys Have To Get A Job And Pay For The Damage The Snowball And Icle Left.Then The School Was After Him For Bragging.//== ==// Destine- This story had me laughing pretty hard. Good job. I'm not sure why you take the time to capitalize every word, but I can get over that :) You are a good writer and I think you will have a good semester if you keep working hard. //==

==//Response 3 : (Descriptive Walk Walking Up From Lunch.) After Lunch I Been To Feel The Pain Already An I Aint On The Steps.The Same Thing Everyday .I Begin To Walk Up The Stairs An See Kids Fighting Or Arguing.I Stop To Look, Then Begin Walking Up The Crowded Stairs Full With Teenagers .They Take Their Time While I Try To Rush.They Stop And Talk.I Try Walk Around But There Is Kids Coming Down The Steps On The Other Side Too, Wondering Do They Know We Have 4 Mintues To Get To Class On Time.I Get Frustrated.Loud Screams Occuring Frrom Each Flight Of Stairs.I Decide To Go The Other Way.I Walk Up The Libary Side Stairs.Only A Few Teens There.I Am Almost To Class And The Bell Rings.I Think Another Arugment Is Going To Occur.I Always See Marquon And Davon In The Same Spot Everytime.Im Exshauted And Ready To Sit Down.Then Marquon And Davon Come Over Trying To Fight.Security Comes And Pull Them Off Me And I Walk To Class.It Was Like I Took A Journey Around The Whole School In 4 Mintues.I Walk In Math Then It Starts All Over Just Like Everyday's Class In 5th Period Starts.//== ==//Response 5 : A Memorable Event Happened On October 29,2011.Chris Brown Came To Pittsburgh.That Day Was Amazing I Was Jumping Out My Skin Ready For 7:00 To Come.The Night I Couldnt Sleep .That Morning I Woke Up At 10:00 A.m, I Went To The Hair Salon And Got My Hair Done.There It Was Really Hot ,Lots Of Hair Suplies Everywhere,Hair On The Floor,Yelling And Lots Of Gossip There.My Ears Was Ringing With Info To Tell My Fiends.I Then Quickly Grabbed My Phone And Began Texting Shelby.After I Left I Went To The Mall. It Was Kinda Packed With People.I Thought Would Be At Home Sleeping.Getting Their Saturday Sleep.I Went Into My Favorite Stores.Hollister,Abercrombie And Fitch,Wet Seal,Claire's,Rue 21, And The Jewelry Spots.It Was Alot Of Walking.My Knees Couldnt Resist The Achy FeelingIn My Knee.//== ==//Response 6 : I Was Working In The PNC Bank On Tuesday Feburary 9,2012.In Downtown Pittsburgh.I Noticed As I Was About I To Bring The Next Customer Up To The Desk A Car Going Full Force Towards The Bank.I Began Shaking And Yelling "Get Out The Way" To The Customers.They Didnt Seem To Know What I Was Talking About.I Sped Out The Back Door An Ran Across The To The Next Building.I Heard A Heard A Loud "Thump" And Saw The Driver Run Out The Back Door.He Was Hiding Between The// Dumpsters.I Ran To Go See What He Was Doing.He Was Balled Up With His Head In His Knees,Crying.I Asked Him Why He Did It And Whats Wrong.He Said I Am Crazy An I Have Been Having Problems With Life.He Said "I Lost My Job,My Mother Is Sick In The Hospital,And My Wife Has Left Me And Said I Can Never See My Children Again".As He Told Me The Story He Sobbed Weakly.He Then Said "I Cant Live Wthout My Mother, Or Children , They Mean Everything To Me.I Told Him About My Life And He Thought I //Had A Great Life And Decided He Can Do Better If He Doesnt Go To Jail.//==

==//Response 7 : I Feel If Wilkinsburg Had More Activites For Students To Do In An Out Of School.They Would Get More Students Or Students That Would Actually Wanna Go Here.I Feel The Boy's Basketball Team Gets Treated Better Than Any Other Sports Students Particapate.If They Treated Everyone Equally They Would Get More Donors An Easier Scholarships.I Would Actually Wanna Graduate HereAnd LeaveWith A Successful Education If The Teachers Were MoreStricked And HadMore Discpline To The Students .//==

//Response 8 : 30 Years From Now I See Myself Being A Retired Basketball .I Could See Myself Also Taking Care Of People In Need.I Feel Bad Now Because There Is People Struggling To Live Or Breath.//
==//Response 9 : It Was Track Season And Jacob Decided To Try Out.Jacob Was About 5"3 ,Skinny,Had Blonde Hair,Glasses,An A Staright "A" Student. He Had A Power That He Only Knew About.The Power Of Speed.The Power Of Speed Is Speed Backed Up In Case You Run Out Of Energy To Finish The Race.He Had Noticed The Power About 2 Years Ago When He Ran Track With His Older Brother,But He Was In A Lower Running Group.Thats Why He Decided To Run Track This Year Because He Was In A Higher Group Then He Was 2Years Ago.//==
 * A main character who has a superpower
 * Something that the main character wants in life (Save the world, the city, stop crime, etc)
 * An enemy, or group, who wants to stop the superhero from accomplishing their goal
 * A weakness (superman- kryptonite)
 * Descriptive language to describe characters, settings, feelings etc.
 * a conflict (major, like spiderman fighting the green goblin)
 * a resolution to the conflict

//Response 10 ://

 * ==Spring break, Easter egg, and a long church service==
 * ==a scary mechanic, a crowbar, and a broken lock==
 * ==Kenny, an air ball, an egg==
 * ==the computer lab, iss, a broken car window==
 * ==Mr. Boll's class, a good poem, Mcdonald's new chicken bites.==
 * ==An Ipad, a video camera, and a really nice pen==
 * ==kenny, kenny, kenny==
 * ==a movie theater, popcorn with no butter, a song that keeps playing==
 * ==A really long jog, a heart skipping a beat, barefoot==
 * ==The little red thing, ping pong ball, a piece of chalk==
 * ==Chelsea's birthday, no swagg, 15 punches==

==Response 11 : August 29,2010 My First Day Of Middle School.I Knew It Was Going To Be A Boring Day.Every First Day Of School Is Boring.All We Do Is Meet The Teachers,And Read Boring Papers About The Rules Of That Class And Whats Expected.I Was Very Nervous Because I Was Coming Out Of Elementary Where I Knew Everyone To Knowing About 5 People Out Of About 200.It Was Homeroom And I Was So Confused Trying To Get To Homeroom.I Was Looking For 207 But Ended Up Going On The High School Floor With Kids Everywhere.They Were Yelling,Screaming,And Horseplaying.I Then Reconized A Familiar Face And It Was A Girl That Live On My Street. I Was Relieved .She Showed Me The Right Floor And The Right Class.I Then Walked In To A Homeroom Of About 10 Kids And A Big Headed Teacher.He Greeted Me And Said "Hi Im Mr.Boll ,Welcome To Middle School", Then He Gave Me This BIG Smile An I Just Looked And Went To A Sit.I Was Just Looking Around And I Saw A Girl Named "Shelby" And I Knew We Were Going To Be Besties.After The Bell Rang For First Period The Halls Cluttered With Kids Looking So Confused.==

==Response 12 :If I Had 100 Million Dollars I Dont Know What I Would Do I Would Go CRAZY ! I Would Still Go To School A Try An Work For A ScholarShip But If I Didnt Get One I Would Pay For College With That Money.I Would Also Buy My Family A House Out Of State,Like Los Angelos Because That Is Where I Always Dreamed Of Living.I Believe Thats Where Dreams Really Come True.==

==Response 14 : Still Today African Americans Should Be Comfortable By Their Appearances, But It Seems They're Not Comfortable About Stepping Out The Door And Getting Judge By Their Race.On Feburary 26 , 2012 Trayvon Martin Was Waling To The7Elven ForSome Skittles And A Arizonia To Go Home And Watch Dunk Challenge With His Dad.ItWas Raining And As Trayvon Was Walking==

//My Mom Is One Of My Favorite People In the World Because She Brought Me Into The World, And She Has Been There For Me Since Day One And She Also Supported Me And Still Does.//
==//My Litle Sister Is Another Important Person In My Life Because I Love Her To Death.She Is My Only Sister And I Wish I Had More.I Would Like To Be Able To Teach My Little Sister The Right And Wrongs In Life. She Is My Little Angel And Is Perfect In My Eyes.We Have Our Ups And Downs But We Are Able To Pull Back Together And Be Besties Like Always.By The End Of The Day I Have Her And She Has Me.//==

//My Little Brother Is Another Important Person ToMe Because My Little Brother Is My Favorite//
==//Response 16 : The Most Boring Day I Ever Had Was When I Was Suspended From School.It Was Like Jail.And The Following Week We Had Days Off.So I Felt So Lonely.Losing Out On My Education, And Not Being Able To See Any Of My Friends.I Think If I Got Suspended I Can Take The Consequences.//==

Im Writing From The Perspect Of Kenny"s Braid.
==Im Kenny's Braids I Wish I Wasnt.I Hate Getting My Hair Combed And Washed.When I First Get My Hair Braided It Is So Tight I Can Barley Move My Neck.But After I Am Done I Look In The Mirror To See My Baby Hair Pushed Up And My Kitchen Gripped Up.The Best Thing About It Is I Dont Have To Get My Hair Done For Another 2 Weeks.==

Response 17 :

I Never Thought That Wearing No Hoodie, Could Cause Your Life. And I Never Thought You Could Kill Somebody And Go Out The Same Night. Every Dog That You See That, Dont Mean That He Bite. And Everything Thats Black Aint Evil, Everything Thats Pure Aint White. 'Cause You Think That Im Doing Wong Dont Mean That You Right. 'Cause The Ones That You Think Thats Wont, Them The Ones That Might. Certain People In This World The System Dont Like. When You Living What You Worth Is How They Value Your Life. I Can Do All Things Through Christ, Who Strengthen Me. And Even When I Pray For My Enemies. And Pac Said It Best "Only God Can Judge Me." Trayvon Lil Homie, I Want You To Know You Really Touched Me.