Shaniya+Gomez

//Shaniya// //when we have a sub in class kids want to act stupid. first of all they want to show off and throw thing around the room. many kids also skip class like the teacher is not going to find out.// //an eye for an eye will make the whole world blind// if everyone treated everyone else the way people treated them, for example, if someone poked my eye out, and i poked their eye out in return, no good will come of it. Justice not racism
 * Blacks were fighting for years to become equal to white people. In the 1960s and before that we have been separated by color. It is now 2012 and we still have racism in our community. It is not right that we still get judged for the way that we look. These same situations that I am talking about right know is the same situation that Trayvon Martin had to deal with. Trayvon was coming from the seven eleven from getting an Arizona tea and some skittles when he was shot and killed. He was killed by a man named George Zimmerman because he had on a black hoodie with his hood on in Zimmerman’s eyes he looked suspicious. Zimmerman called the police and the police told him not to pursue but he still did. It was wrong that just because he was walking in a Florida gated white community he gets shot and killed. Trayvon martin was a nice kid visiting his dad and his fiancé, he was only 17 years old and still had life ahead of him when this tragic incident happened. This incident happened February, 26, 2012 it took the police a whole month until they finally arrested Zimmerman. This incident is just like the incident that happened in Pittsburgh, pa in Homewood to a kid named Jordan miles. ** **Miles, an honors student at the Creative and Performing Arts high school, accused officers Richard Ewing, Michael Saldutte and David Sisak of beating him the night of Jan. 12, 2010. The officers, who are white, said Miles, who is black, was injured when he fought with them during an arrest. The real thing is that Jordan was attacked when pulling out an moutian dew bottle.**

You started off so well in this class but you have slowed down a littlle lately. Keep working hard. You can be a really good writer.

//it is hard growing up blac//
//__if i won o__////__ne hundred million dollars .__// //if i won one hundred million dollars i would give many people money for everything they ever done first i would give my mother ten million my father ten million my grandma ten million my aunt ten million and my uncle and other uncle ten million and then my other aunt five million. then with the rest of my money i would use for my college and put the rest in a bank account. with the money i have left after giving everyone there money i would pick the number one college for doctors in the country and study to be a doctor instead of being a nurse i would become a doctor and make sure i be set for the rest of my life and my future kids. i would also make sure whoever i gave money and they got money set up a college fund for there kids//
 * why did it happen to him **
 * just because he looked like me **
 * i speak my mind and it flowed **
 * with the wind i him **
 * trey thats him he had to go **
 * he only seventeen he was hungry **
 * he got soad skeetls to zemm your **
 * die man i ant playing man **

spring break, easter egg, and long church service. it was easter sunday i just woke up my mom walks in my room its easter wake up we have to go to church. //__superhero story!!!__// //__once upon a day i was walking into a bank trying to cash a 1,000 dollar check for one week but all of a sudden this supervillian came out of no where and swept me of my feet and i started to scream for my life when this nice buff lokking superhero came to my rescue and i was thankful fo that.__// //__2 weeks later i am walking to red lobster to have a nice dinner fo my self when i looked down in bumped into this man this man was so very handsome where when i seen him i thought it was love at first sight so when i bumped into him my purse fll he helped me pick it up. i said hello he said hello my name is justin i said hello my name is maria he said are u going in ther with someone i said no he said well me neither he said may i join u .__// //__30 years from now i see my self as a respected top nurse in miami florida with a husband and kids that get straight a's in highschool on there way to college__// //**personally to me wilkinsburgh is not perfect. there are many things that need to be changed about this school for me to want to graduate from here. one of the main thing we need are new bathroom stales, disposable boxes, and hot water. the reasons i said this is because first of all there are like three stales with doors with no locks. us females need disposable boxes for personal stuff and we need hot wqater to help kill germs on our hands. also some other things need done are new floors leading to the girls gym and also we need a new girls gym. the reasons why i said those things are first of all those stairs leading to the girls gym are like breaking down, molding and leaking and i think that personally if they keep that stuff it will eventually make us kids sick and i think it will become a major health risk. we need a new gym and gym teacher because first of all that gym is horrible it makes me not want to go to gym and i like gym and i think we need a new gym teacher because when i had gym the gym teacher was so boring it mad me not want to go to her class and if we had a new teacher maybe kids will want gym more often. i also think we should have more teachers like mr. boll he makes us kids want to go to his class because he has fun even though he teachs us and gives us work.**// **//(point of veiw a witness)//** **//i was at pnc bank about to go inside the building when all of a sudden i see this a jeep hyonda suv drove into the pncs firsts side center i was so shocked in about two seconds after this happened this black male middle-aged five foot nine inches came running out of the car .//** //(**descriptive person)**// //**the best person that i love so much is my baby cousin. i love my baby cousin her name is justice gomez born 2/25/08. since it is 2012 it feels like i am getting so old and she is getting so big. everytime i see her i be so amazed because she is so advanced compared to some of the other kids her age. my baby cousin justice knows how to count and also know how to count up to ten in spanish. she goes up to her dad which is my uncle she be like whos daddys pretty girl i be cracking up. she knows how to pour pop for her dad and she knows how to wash dishes. she has an older brother who is 9 and a younger brother who is 2 and her mom my aunt she is expecting another one. i just pray she dont have a girl because she is going to be so jelouse. her and her younger brother is so funny because when he was younger she used to beat him up and know he beats her up. my baby cousin is so advanced me and my family be like she been here before because she acts just like a little old lady. everytime she see me she be like hi niya i missed you so much are you staying to night over my house you can sleep in my bed if you are. so thats one of the people that i love so much and cant get enough of and cant wait to got over my aunt and uncles house this weekend and see my little boobutt thats her nick name and my fatdude her brothers nick name and the oldest gus his nick name. love you boobutt!!!!!!**//

//**(__descriptive walk)__**// //**every morning when i get dressed and for school. after im done i walk out my house. at first it dosent seem to cold but as i start to walk out of pauls court i realize i should of dressed heavier. then i realize i dont have much time because i took to long to get dressed. so i just start speed walking not worring about the cold air hitting my ears and nose. as im walking past clark street i really start to feel the cold air my nose is running eyes watering, and also my ears are hurting. i just pay no mind because everyday i walk to school i do the same thing my dad be telling me tha ti need to dress heavier but i just dont listen. so all i do is just keep on walking looking at the other people walking people standing at the bus stop and the cars driving past. sometimes as i walk to school i wonder when i be walking do people in there cars be looking at me? i walk past old scary buildings and houses and wonder why they havent torn them down yet. i walk past dogs burking and on broke down sidewalks. sometimes i wonder why this community is like this but i dont let it get to me i just keep on walking. after all this that i go through i just keep on walking and finally get to school.**// Shaniya, good job so far. I think you are a good writer. Keep it up. __//**(carnival, soggy french fries, new pair of jeans.)**//__ //**it was june, 26, 2012 and it was a hot day so me and my friends decided to goto the carnival. we decided that first we will goto the mall then after get dressed in our new outfits then goto the carnival around 3:00. so first we went to the mall around 1:00 and i had a hundred dollars and decided to only spend 50 at the carnival 50 at the mall. at around 2:00 i have my outfit and we leave from the mall. i go home take a quick shower and get dressed. i call my friend we leave for the carnival and get there exactly at 3:00. were having a good time my new pair of jeans and shirt are still fresh and its almost the end of the carnival so we decided to get on one more ride. my friend notices the person a couple feet in front of us has french fries and they look super soggy and there gettin on the ride with them. she gets mad and i just tell her nothings going to happen. im on the ferris wheel and it is super fun. then all of a sudden something horrible happens i get hit in the face with them soggy french fries and im super mad and so is my friend it got in our face and our new outfit. at the end of the ride and look for who did it me and my friend said say sorry and the person didnt so i talked bad and the person punched me in the face. when she did that it turned into a carnival fight at the end of the fight we all where jacked up so our trip at the carnival ended up turning** **out from being good to bad!!!!!!**//

//**(__response 1)__**// //**my thoughts of the comunity are i really like were i live, but not the community. i love my house but not all of the gun violence and stuff**. **i feel that with all this gun violence and stuff i may be scared to be outside when its dark. when i walk around my community i hate to see the crackheads and homeless people on the streets i feel that i can do more to help my people. i know that they didnt have to live that way but it saddens me to see them that way. as far as my school go its a nice school but we need more school funds. these lockers have to go they are broke down and rusty and i hate that.**//