Chelsea+Martin

Chelsea
My feelings about where i live is kinda good a little. I like where i live but, not the community. There's a lot of drama and gun violence. Their always shooting and fighting so it's kinda scary to be going outside at night time. It's sad seeing crack heads that didn't have to live that way and thembeing outside on the streets.

One day there was an carnival being held today and everyone went to go have fun. So me and my friend's decided to go and meet our other friends. We got to the carnival and meet our other friends, the first thing we had decided to was to play games. It was real crowded so the lines were kinda long so we all decided to go eat. We got to the consession stand and 2 of my friends order their food first. Next, i ordered cheese fries, a mountain dew, and my bestfriend orded the same. We all waited for our food patiently; so as we waited we talked about what we did so far for the summer and where we went and things like that. My friends got their food because their food was ready and they order first of course. Then, me and my bestfriend got our food beacause we ordered together. I got my fries and everything nd we went and sat down to eat. So i went to go eat my fries and they were extra soggy because of all the cheese and they let them sit. I got mad and i took the fries back to the consession stand to get better and fresher ones. I went and sat down still mad because, im hungry and now my stomach is growling. So my fries finally got done and i ate so now i'm happy again. We then got on the ferris wheel, played games, and got some snacks and something to drink. So i had on my new jeans and we were walking around when a girl bumped into me and spilled her pepsi on my new jeans so i was mad and i guess that day was not just my day. We all left i went home and changed my jeans and then we all went to the mall and i bought some new jeans.! THE END

Chels- I have always thought you were a talented writer and thinker. I like that you are in this class. Good work on the three element story and they neighborhood paragraph. Keep doing your thing.

A Descriptive walk: A walk from my house to school is always the same. Starts with me leaving the house as i'm shutting the door behind myself to the sounds of cars driving past. A few steps across my graish bluish painted porch and down myh 7 steps. I'm walking down the street as i pass Marquis's house and then budddy's house as i listen to myh music on my phone. Then i pass the Jamacian store,children's clothes store,and a hair shop on the corner. Next, i cross the abandoned old ice cream polar or deli shop one of the two. I pass my cousins grandma's house and the PT Park with the basketball court and the other half the par with yellow slides and the two blue poles that hold the two swings and a bench. I keep walking as my distance to school gets a little closer. I then make a left as i pass a church,walk a block straight, and then make a right. I pass a old mechanic place wondering do they still fix things.?, Are they still in business.? I walk straight make a right as i see the the red,yellow,and green,street light as im crossing the street walking straight towards the street lights. Again i make a right as the flat surface turns into a up steep hill. I then get to the top of the hill and pass Mahkita's now i know for sure im very close to school. I pass the hosanna house and I pass another church and im at school. THE END

=== One day everything just went down hill and me and my husband had a huge fight. We decided to get a divorce and he had already signed the papers so all i had to do was sign them so i did. Then, we had a meeting with our lawyers,he was with his on one side of the table and i was on the other side with mines. So we got in the story of what we are going to do with the house and the money and his lawyer is talking about he could do so. Next, my lawyer and his lawyer is argueing and then my lawyer tells me that they can do this. I instantly got red in the face and im so mad i start cussing and yelling at my ex-husbandd in different languages because, i am a translator so i know a bunch of different langauges. I then said matter a fact he can have all the money and everything but, your not going to get away with this.! Well a couple of days later i wanted til' all of the money got transfored tew his account. I had already moved out and took my car and everything.After, that happened and all the money was put in his PNC Bank account i had then had a plan. Well i still had the keys tew his Camro so i caught a cab to his house and he wasn't home. He had took his work car and went to work. I'm still mad about the whole situation so i got in his camro, started the engine and was on my way down to the bank. I was on a straight street and straight ahead was the PNC Bank so i start going fast through all the green light and then Boom.! I crashed into the bank and i got out the car which was totaled. I went into the bank found his account and took all the money there was and bolted out of the bank. I caught a cab to my apartment grabed my suit cases put them in my Mustang and i was on my way to California. ===

30 years later.
== When i get older i want to be a Translator, someone who translates what another person is saying in a different language to the other person. I want to live in New York or New York City. I want to be married and have a happy relationship. I really don't want kids but, if i decide to i want twins or i want to have a boy first then a girl. ==

== So there is a girl name Vicky is she is a super hero with special powers. Now she is not like every other superhero she has multi-powers. She can shape shift,freeze things,throw fire,fly, move things with her mind,and a lot more. She has long silky black hair with highlights,she has eyes that are bright which change different colors.Her super hero outfit changes colors,bullet proof, and all that.Everyone knows she has special powers because, she goes to a school with a bunch of kids who have special powers too. == == Also, like all super heros she has a enemie. Her name is Sam is she's a goth type of girl. Vicky and Sam were bestfriend's til' Sam started doing bad things.Vicky stop being with her because,she didn't like what Sam was doing. ==

== Today's my birthday March 27th.So i decided to go to school today to see my friends. I seen a couple people who had no swagg today idk why lol. So everybody knew it was my birthday today. It was kinda scary walking in the hall ways because, people give birthday punches in the arm on people's birthday. I went around the corner and Aaron,Davon,and Dramar gave me 15 punches in my right and my left arm which still hurts. ==

== If i had a 100 million dollars i would give my mom 10 million dollars and let her do what she wants with it. I would also do the same for my dad i would give him 10 million dollars too. I would buy me a new nice house and a car well a Mustang. I would save 4 million dollars for when i go to college.I would save 5 million dollars for a rainy day,when i would really need the money. Then after i got all my important things taken care of i would go shopping! ==

(When i'm mad i have 2 sides of me.!)
== One day i was in lunch and everyone was saying oh...she's about to come over here n try to fight yhu.So my good side is tellling me tell her how yhu feel in a nice way and tell her yhu don't have no problems with her.Then my bad side was teling me to just punch her in the face if ahe try and come over here and get loud and smart with yhu. Next, a couple minutes later the girl was walking over to me and she asked me politely was i talking about her and i decided to go with myh good side and tell her how i feel and that i really wasn't talking about her. She said okay and that she had n problems with me and so the sitituation was resolved. ==

== Chelsea- I really like reading your writing. Hopefully you are having fun in this class. You are talented and I really made this class to give people like you th echance to write as much as you can. Good job. Keep growing"The man sneezed. ==

3 element story(a broken touch screen,on punishmet,and a show on tv)
== Well one day i got home from school and i had a bad day. I got a phone call home and i got suspended. So when i got home i already knew i was going to be in trouble. Then i got in the house and my mom told me to come here, that she needed to talk to me. I went in my mom's room and she told me that i wasz on punishmet for 2 weeks. She told me i better get my act together or i'm going to be on punishment longer. After, that i went upstairs to myh room and slammed my door closed because, i was furious. Then i was layn on my bed trying to find something to do and then my little brother spilled juice on my brand new shoes. So then i got way madder then i was before so i threw myh fone and it broke in half. Next, i told my mom i broke my fone and she told me i had to wait to get a new one because, i was on punishment. Still mad and all: i remembered that BGC (bad girls club) was coming on so i went upstairs in myh room turned on my tv and decided to watch BGC til' i fell asleep. ==

The Avengers.!!!
My 2 favorite parts of this movie is when. One when the hulk and thor stopped fightin and the hulk randomly socked thor and Thor's body jus flew to the said. Also, another one of my favorite parts is when Loki tells the hulk to stop and says some rude things and the hulk just started slaming him around. This movie was basicly about some marvel hereos or characters to come together and work as a team. To keep Loki from taking over earth or destroying it.