Annette+Trent

==One day i was in my car driving on my way to my daughters peformance. So i was rushing here i am downtown and it alot of traffic. My daughters peforment start at 5:30 and it was 4:50. So we started moving a little im gettin a little happy so traffic stops i hear beepin and people screming out there cars so it hits 5:00 im getting nervious i dont no wat to do the first thing that pops in my mind is to drive thru the pnc bank because my daughter school is behind the pnc bank. So i swirve thru the bank up the starse and out the window and i drives and tell i get to her school and there i am at her school. My window is busted my car is all scratched up but i dont care i go in and its 5::29.I rush to my seat and there she is performing so after the performance we had some refreshments and we lef.t We got out in the car my daughter said mom wat happinent to==

A PERFECT SCHOOL
==Wilkisburg is not perfect. No school is these are the thing that wilkinsbug need in order for me to graduate here funner and respectful teacher ,doors, on the bathroom stalls,soap, hot water and, paper towls in the bathrooms,a better girls gym, more classes,nicer lockers,more materials for school and, just a cleaner schoool period.==

GOOD ANNETTE AND BAD ANNETTE!!!
(I HAVE A SITUATION THAT I NEED TO MAKE A DECISION ON) THIS KID IS GETTIN BULLIED IN THE LUNCH ROOM AND THE BULLIE SAID IF I SNITCH THEN HE WAS GOIN TO BEAT ME UP SO I DONT NO WAT TO DO. BAD PERSON* YOU SHOULD GO POUND HIS HEAD IN AND GRAB MY FRIEND. GOOD PERSON* JUST GO TELL THE TEACHER SO HE CAN GET DISAPLAN.

THE BAD PART ABOUT IT IS THAT ITS MY FRIEND GETTIN BEAT UP SO YOU ALLREADY NO WAT I WILL DO GO HELP MY FRIEND I WILL FOLLOW THE BAD PERSON(PERIOD!)

RACIAM IS HORIBLE!! people are gettin shot, beat, and killed for no reason like trayvon martin got shot byGorge Zimmerman and a couple of years ago a young man name jordan miles got beat by the cops because they thought he hade a gun but it was a moutaindu.

Annette, I like some of your stuff from this quarter, but you need to make sure e you are working hard every day. You can do it. Stay focused.


 * why did it happen to him **
 * just because he looked like me **
 * i speak my mind and it flowed **
 * with the wind i him **
 * trey thats him he had to go **
 * he only seventeen he was hungry **
 * he got soad skeetls to zemm your **
 * die man i ant playing man **

A Descriptive walk My walk to school always start wen i walk out the door it be so cold and windy i be hungery and crankey sometimes

Respone1 I like were im at right now good school and an okay street were i live right now. I ike my school because there not as much trouble maker as there was last year and there are good teacher here.Were i live at right the reason why i like my street alittle bit because some times my street is loud and some times it nice and quiet.

(A CARNIVAL, SOGGY FRENCH FRIES AND, A NEW PAIR OF JEANS) One day when i was so bored in the house it was a hot summer sunny day .My mom ask me if i wanted to go out i said yea. So she ask me if i wanted to go to a carnival i said sure so we are in the car minding are binsness. So this lady is standin at the bus stop and we curve the corner and there she go throght some soggy fries and my mom car. My mom was so upset but we went to the car wash and washed the car i was so hunger after that so my mom took me the mcdonlds. I got ketchup on my NEW PAIR OF JEANS! I was so mad because i wanted to make it to the carnival.I had to go home and change my jeans and then we finaly made it to the carival i saw my cuzzin my aunts and my friends i had a good time its was so awsomeTHE END.